Post by highvoltageziggy on Dec 28, 2006 19:31:54 GMT -5
Hiya!
Here is the first episode of my tlc fan fiction series "The Diary Of Laurence Flynn". It's entitled "Welcome to my home" hope you like
I've changed the name as it's slightly different from the original as the main focus is not the crappy NHS but Dr Flynn himself!
and also there's a whole new set of characters in it in the form of introducing Laurence's home life!
Enjoy!
pls note though that Laurence and Flynn are the same person (sorry couldn't decide which one to use) and that Ziggy Flynn is SUPPOSED to be my Mary-sue (as that's part of her character and how it makes her so annoying lol )
Hope you like it. GIVE FEEDBACK PLZZZZ
SCENE 1. INT. MESS - DAY
LAURENCE FLYNN ENTERS AND MAKES ACTIONS TO THE FOLLOWING SPEECH
NARRATOR:
(V.O.) This is Laurence Flynn. He's your average 28 year old man with decent looks, charming personality and good body shape. He enjoys art, music, theatre and other girly things. (BEAT) in his spare time, Laurence likes to amuse himself by writing horror novels and drawing Japanese anime drawings of his characters. Overall Laurence lives a very happy life with lots of aspirations and surprises! However sometimes all of a sudden, Laurence's life seems to change slightly with his happy regimes suddenly becoming disrupted by a cloud of cynical misery. (BEAT) This usually happens when he wakes up in the morning and realises… he's a doctor!
LAURENCE COLLAPSES ON THE NEARBY SOFA
HE SITS UP
LAURENCE:
(ACTING OUT A "FOCUSED" GESTURE) coffee
LAURENCE GETS UP AND MAKES HIMSELF A CUP OF COFFEE.
HE THEN BEGINS TO AD ADDITIONAL GRAIN TO HIS MUG
LAURENCE (CONT'D):
(ADDING THE GRAIN) one, two, three, four, five hours!
LAURENCE DRINKS THE COFFEE MAKING HIM SHUDDER SLIGHTLY FROM THE FOUL TASTE
HE BECOMES INSTANTLY ENERGETIC
LAURENCE (CONT'D):
Right! (CLAPS HIS HANDS) now I'm ready to hit the ward!
LAURENCE BEGINS TO WALK CONFIDENTLY TO THE WARD BUT COLLAPSES ON THE SOFA AGAIN WITH A SOB
LAURENCE (CONT'D):
I can't be bothered
DR STEPHEN NOBLE ENTERS
NOBLE:
All right Flynn?
FLYNN:
(MUMBLING) hello
NOBLE:
You seen my lucky pen anywhere?
FLYNN:
(STILL MUMBLING) no
NOBLE NOTICES FLYNN'S DEPRESSION
HE SITS DOWN ON THE SOFA NEXT TO HIM
NOBLE:
(IN A PATRONISING VOICE) what's wrong? Has someone been mean to you?
FLYNN:
No just my way of getting through the day
NOBLE:
The day hasn't begun yet
FLYNN:
Everyone starts somewhere
NOBLE:
Come on what's wrong?
FLYNN:
(SIGH) ok. If you must know I'm depressed
NOBLE:
You're always depressed!
FLYNN:
Yeah. Well I'm particularly depressed now!
NOBLE:
And why might that be?
FLYNN:
Well I've been thinking,
NOBLE:
Uh oh!
FLYNN:
I mean I've been working here too months now and still…
NOBLE:
You still haven't done it
FLYNN:
No! I still haven't found medicine to be what I want it to be!
NOBLE:
Oh you're worried about that again?
FLYNN:
Yeah it's pathetic isn't it?
NOBLE:
There's no need to worry about that Flynn. (PUTS HIS HAND ON FLYNN'S SHOULDERS) Here. Let me tell you a little story…
FLYNN:
Oh great
MUSIC BEGINS TO PLAY AS NOBLE NARRATES
NOBLE:
You see Flynn when I was your age
FLYNN:
Which was only two years ago
NOBLE:
Yes. When I was your age, I didn't have the best of times. Sometimes I thought life was not worth living
MUSIC STOPS
THERE IS SILENCE
FLYNN:
What that doesn't make sense. What happened after that?
NOBLE:
Life doesn't make sense Flynn. You can't expect the world spell everything out for you, you have to dig deeper into life's inner sub textual meaning.
FLYNN:
(CONFUSED) (PAUSE) Ok well it didn't quite solve my problem
NOBLE:
You'll figure it out when you're older!
FLYNN:
(BEAT) Ok I'll bear it in mind then.
NOBLE:
Good and then when the day comes that you're feeling all low and just everything in the world to just go away. You can think of those kind words Dr Noble told you and everything will be much better again.
FLYNN:
Yeah if I haven't jumped off a cliff before hand
FLYNN'S BLEEPER GOES OFF
HE GROANS AND FAINTS TO THE FLOOR
FLYNN (CONT'D):
Drive me to casualty
NOBLE ROLLS HIS EYES AND DRAGS FLYNN BY THE LEG OUT OF THE ROOM EXITING
Here is the first episode of my tlc fan fiction series "The Diary Of Laurence Flynn". It's entitled "Welcome to my home" hope you like
I've changed the name as it's slightly different from the original as the main focus is not the crappy NHS but Dr Flynn himself!
and also there's a whole new set of characters in it in the form of introducing Laurence's home life!
Enjoy!
pls note though that Laurence and Flynn are the same person (sorry couldn't decide which one to use) and that Ziggy Flynn is SUPPOSED to be my Mary-sue (as that's part of her character and how it makes her so annoying lol )
Hope you like it. GIVE FEEDBACK PLZZZZ
SCENE 1. INT. MESS - DAY
LAURENCE FLYNN ENTERS AND MAKES ACTIONS TO THE FOLLOWING SPEECH
NARRATOR:
(V.O.) This is Laurence Flynn. He's your average 28 year old man with decent looks, charming personality and good body shape. He enjoys art, music, theatre and other girly things. (BEAT) in his spare time, Laurence likes to amuse himself by writing horror novels and drawing Japanese anime drawings of his characters. Overall Laurence lives a very happy life with lots of aspirations and surprises! However sometimes all of a sudden, Laurence's life seems to change slightly with his happy regimes suddenly becoming disrupted by a cloud of cynical misery. (BEAT) This usually happens when he wakes up in the morning and realises… he's a doctor!
LAURENCE COLLAPSES ON THE NEARBY SOFA
HE SITS UP
LAURENCE:
(ACTING OUT A "FOCUSED" GESTURE) coffee
LAURENCE GETS UP AND MAKES HIMSELF A CUP OF COFFEE.
HE THEN BEGINS TO AD ADDITIONAL GRAIN TO HIS MUG
LAURENCE (CONT'D):
(ADDING THE GRAIN) one, two, three, four, five hours!
LAURENCE DRINKS THE COFFEE MAKING HIM SHUDDER SLIGHTLY FROM THE FOUL TASTE
HE BECOMES INSTANTLY ENERGETIC
LAURENCE (CONT'D):
Right! (CLAPS HIS HANDS) now I'm ready to hit the ward!
LAURENCE BEGINS TO WALK CONFIDENTLY TO THE WARD BUT COLLAPSES ON THE SOFA AGAIN WITH A SOB
LAURENCE (CONT'D):
I can't be bothered
DR STEPHEN NOBLE ENTERS
NOBLE:
All right Flynn?
FLYNN:
(MUMBLING) hello
NOBLE:
You seen my lucky pen anywhere?
FLYNN:
(STILL MUMBLING) no
NOBLE NOTICES FLYNN'S DEPRESSION
HE SITS DOWN ON THE SOFA NEXT TO HIM
NOBLE:
(IN A PATRONISING VOICE) what's wrong? Has someone been mean to you?
FLYNN:
No just my way of getting through the day
NOBLE:
The day hasn't begun yet
FLYNN:
Everyone starts somewhere
NOBLE:
Come on what's wrong?
FLYNN:
(SIGH) ok. If you must know I'm depressed
NOBLE:
You're always depressed!
FLYNN:
Yeah. Well I'm particularly depressed now!
NOBLE:
And why might that be?
FLYNN:
Well I've been thinking,
NOBLE:
Uh oh!
FLYNN:
I mean I've been working here too months now and still…
NOBLE:
You still haven't done it
FLYNN:
No! I still haven't found medicine to be what I want it to be!
NOBLE:
Oh you're worried about that again?
FLYNN:
Yeah it's pathetic isn't it?
NOBLE:
There's no need to worry about that Flynn. (PUTS HIS HAND ON FLYNN'S SHOULDERS) Here. Let me tell you a little story…
FLYNN:
Oh great
MUSIC BEGINS TO PLAY AS NOBLE NARRATES
NOBLE:
You see Flynn when I was your age
FLYNN:
Which was only two years ago
NOBLE:
Yes. When I was your age, I didn't have the best of times. Sometimes I thought life was not worth living
MUSIC STOPS
THERE IS SILENCE
FLYNN:
What that doesn't make sense. What happened after that?
NOBLE:
Life doesn't make sense Flynn. You can't expect the world spell everything out for you, you have to dig deeper into life's inner sub textual meaning.
FLYNN:
(CONFUSED) (PAUSE) Ok well it didn't quite solve my problem
NOBLE:
You'll figure it out when you're older!
FLYNN:
(BEAT) Ok I'll bear it in mind then.
NOBLE:
Good and then when the day comes that you're feeling all low and just everything in the world to just go away. You can think of those kind words Dr Noble told you and everything will be much better again.
FLYNN:
Yeah if I haven't jumped off a cliff before hand
FLYNN'S BLEEPER GOES OFF
HE GROANS AND FAINTS TO THE FLOOR
FLYNN (CONT'D):
Drive me to casualty
NOBLE ROLLS HIS EYES AND DRAGS FLYNN BY THE LEG OUT OF THE ROOM EXITING